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It Couldn't Be by ~Broken-22:iconBroken-22:



You sing ur pain to me
With those deep blue eyes...
My blood grows cold
I start 2 cry
I cant be ur angel
Your saving grace
I place my ice lips upon ur face..
My body shivers as i walk away
This is the end of the game
The closing curtian of our play
You'll move on
Love again
As for me this may be the end
My hearts been broken
It can no longer mend
Please don't worry
I'll be fine
I wish I could have helped you
Wished you could have stayed mine
These last words ive spoken
Are the last that will remain
Your love for me will end
My love for you will be in vain
©2005-2008 ~Broken-22
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Past memories and pains can just randomly appear.....in the back of my mind....
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~WhatAxShame:iconWhatAxShame: Aug 5, 2005, 5:33:44 PM
I like this, but I'd like to make a few suggestions if you don't mind-
People will take you more seriously if you don't use chatspeak in poetry.
Also you might want to develop more of a rhyme scheme than a-b-a-b.

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"What you are hearing is not me"--